Russian War song

[m3838]

I don't know why, but I translated one Russian war song into English and posted Youtube video with subtitles.

But unfortunately I have chosen the video with pretty bad resolution and found better ones, when it's too late.

Tell me, if the translation makes sense. I tried to keep the rhythm and to stay as close to the original as possible.

As for rhymes, Russian version is not rhymed. I am quite surprised to find out, I had full impression it is rhymed.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IeYnZC4IAHk...;watch_response

[Hereward]

I don't know why, but I translated one Russian war song into English and posted Youtube video with subtitles.

But unfortunately I have chosen the video with pretty bad resolution and found better ones, when it's too late.

Tell me, if the translation makes sense. I tried to keep the rhythm and to stay as close to the original as possible.

As for rhymes, Russian version is not rhymed. I am quite surprised to find out, I had full impression it is rhymed.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IeYnZC4IAHk...;watch_response

 

Looks like a fairly good job to me and I translate too (but not Russian).

 

Ian