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  1. wunks

    wunks    Isel

    Thanks for your encouragement!  I've been attempting Haiku and this one felt right.

     

    Peace and Harmony to you and yours

    Erik

    1. Isel

      Isel

      I agree!!...perhaps for this reason i find difficult to remember a haiku that I wrote somewhere:huh:

      But...fortunately...one "somewhere  " is my phone ha ha...and I have found one here. Trying to translate it, the result would be -more or less - the following ( I apologize because my not so good english....):

       

      January morning

      On a dark scenary

      A white fog dances

       

      Have you a nice and starring night!!

      Isra

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  2. wunks

    wunks    Isel

    Thanks for your encouragement!  I've been attempting Haiku and this one felt right.

     

    Peace and Harmony to you and yours

    Erik

    1. Isel

      Isel

      Thank you very much for the reference Erik!

      I have "El árbol de los haikus" book, a recopilation by Albert Liebermann. It's a very nice litle book, that includes some japanese paintings as well.

       

      (I agree with you, perhaps the second version is rounder than the former; but, I don't know,  the start  "I see..." in first version  suggests a some presence that can add a plus of mistery ... ;-D

       

      Kind regards

      Israel

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  3. wunks

    wunks    Isel

    Thanks for your encouragement!  I've been attempting Haiku and this one felt right.

     

    Peace and Harmony to you and yours

    Erik

    1. Isel

      Isel

      Erik, both haikus are very pretty! !. Congratulations!!!.

      I hope your daughter likes the book!!

      ( my sons, 14 and 11,  are as well "with a foot into  " the japanese :D... about mangas and animes)

      Have you a nice day!

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  4. wunks

    wunks    Isel

    Thanks for your encouragement!  I've been attempting Haiku and this one felt right.

     

    Peace and Harmony to you and yours

    Erik

    1. Isel

      Isel

      A few days ago I suggested  my elder son the idea of translating a haiku, as homework for his english lessons.... that seemed to him very difficult ( also to me ha ha!)

      So i will show him your beauty haiku :D

      Thank you Erik!!

      Peace and  happy christmas for you and yours as well.

      Israel

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